loserone Posted 23 hours ago Posted 23 hours ago It's the same door from long ago on the internet. And I can't read Cradley. motorpunk and Matty 2
motorpunk Posted 22 hours ago Author Posted 22 hours ago Ha! Google reverse lookup or something then I guess. It’s a properly hidden away place so I was gobsmacked you recognised it 😂👍🏻
motorpunk Posted 4 hours ago Author Posted 4 hours ago Not proof read. Back cover text. Might tweak it a bit. I think the book is funnier and more offbeat than this explains. Floatylight, Wibble, Matty and 2 others 5
High Jetter Posted 1 hour ago Posted 1 hour ago Only thing that jumps out at me is the 'worker by drowning' would be better as 'worker who drowned' because it suggests they were passing off the death as drowning, to me. I might replace 'supposedly' with 'allegedly' to distance myself, if I were you. Is it the story of your attempts to understand the man, or is it more about him? Just my 2p worth, no obligation.
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