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My WIP book about Red Robbo, and Longbridge stuff.


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It's the same door from long ago on the internet.  And I can't read Cradley.

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Ha! Google reverse lookup or something then I guess. It’s a properly hidden away place so I was gobsmacked you recognised it 😂👍🏻

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Not proof read. Back cover text. Might tweak it a bit. I think the book is funnier and more offbeat than this explains.

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Only thing that jumps out at me is the 'worker by drowning' would be better as 'worker who drowned' because it suggests they were passing off the death as drowning, to me. I might replace 'supposedly' with 'allegedly' to distance myself, if I were you. Is it the story of your attempts to understand the man, or is it more about him? Just my 2p worth, no obligation. 

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